[1542] Gingerbread, part 2

Hi all, This is the next part of Gingerbread (Chapter 28) of my current project. Keep in mind this is a ways into the story, so there are no character introductions here. Everyone has already been introduced. But for context, my MC is in jail, waiting for his trial, for murder. He's been raised by helicopter parents, who are very devout fundamentalist Christians. It was his girlfriend's dad that he killed.

My work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12LZ2Z7KV65dG-GBgwgCefec5G3obsYCJhQGaiaQ374c/edit?usp=sharing

All feedback is welcome. Thanks in advance.

DISCLAIMER: I am not a religious person, and I'm not making any commentary about religion in this story. I was not raised in a religious home. I'm also not an angry Atheist trying to make a point. My character's parents are devout Christians because I decided they are. No other reason. So please don't message me to argue about religion. Thanks.

Critique: https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1fvthty/2014_incompetent_ellie_part3/lqrhgse/