[2419] The Smokers' Theory of Friendship (pt2)
This is the second excerpt of a mostly complete first draft. I'm hoping to gather opinions before a second draft, so please feel free to critique any area.
In part 1, the readers got some background about Sam's past. His mother abandoned him and his half brother as children. Sam now lives with his father. Sam's now-paralyzed brother attacked him as Sam prepared to leave home for college. This part picks up after the attack.
TW: idk but I'm sure there's something in terms of violence/trauma
Here's my piece: The Smokers' Theory of Friendship (pt2)
My crits: [1419] God's Dice
Posted Dec 4, 2024, 7:58 PM UTC
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