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Hi all, I wrote this about a year or 2 ago and haven't written anything since. In my personal opinion it's a steaming pile of trash. But! That is why I am here. I'd love some of your insights into what I've written. I'll take any pointers I can get, there are a few parts I quite like and a lot I hate. Go nuts with it :)

Critique - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1hbdypu/comment/m1zgvlx/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button