Mechcommander 2 Mechwarrior Descriptions (I need some help)

Okay so I made the Mechwarriors of Mechcommander mod for HBS Battletech https://www.nexusmods.com/battletech/mods/734

I'm working on my 2nd mod to add the 2nd set, Mechcommander2 Mechwarriors.

However, there are no descriptions for the mechwarriors like MCG.

So I made some. I like some feedback on the descriptions.

This one -> Mechcommander2 Mechwarrior Excel