[786] Fish Beat

First post here - excited to hear feedback. A short, standalone story.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UFj-neyg4sbCvpIOtvfFvDTCV7bYG9_ZcK_GgxseeuE/edit?pli=1&tab=t.0

Critique:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1iskuhe/comment/mdjuaeg/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button