[2384] Going Home (Revised)

I posted my first draft of this chapter and got some really helpful feedback. So, I went back to the drawing board. Originally, I rushed through the prison release. This time, we get a much deeper look into prison.

I tried to give the reader a better idea what where Luke (the POV) has been and what is going through his mind this time around. We'll see how well it translates to the reader.

Original: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1imk65s/2013_going_home/

Critiques:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1iny9kv/comment/mdc3cb8/

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1imiuyf/comment/mdbmtrf/