[1661] Homeless

Hit me with whatever you got. I'm aiming for grim realism. This is chapter 1 of the story of a man who becomes homeless. Aiming to get the novel wrapped up for a contest at the end of May.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RMtYjhYciXOElT4ZIvcTkr80KLj4NkzZWDnjCkaPT-o/edit?usp=sharing

Critiques

[1469] Al Alma Primera De Las Personas
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1kb39yf/comment/mq2ouqk/?context=3

[1345] A Slow Road
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1kburcj/comment/mq2b3nz/?context=3

[2827] Rust in the Veins https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1iffryr/comment/md69kpd/?context=3