[2247] Adam

This is the first chapter to the novel I am finishing up. Been getting excited and wanted to get a bit of critique since I'm almost done. cart before the horse and all.

I haven't done a final draft of the prose (thats last of course), but this scene is mostly finalized prose anyway. would be more than happy to trade larger portions of our novels for critique if anyone is interested! let me know.

[Adam](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MjOkG\_aivdVNZ3eXE\_\_EZuP9Pdbfw\_vEZT6LCyBAWZk/edit?usp=sharing)

[critique (broken into 3 comments)](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1lda9an/comment/my8cbaq/)