[1790] going abroad - short story

hey ya'll! banked some critiques again, so might as well cash in. this should be a fairly standalone, short story that i wrote with a character i've been writing with. after my deranged fever dream of a last submission, this one should be calm, probably.

synopsis is just someone traveling abroad to find a part of their identity. it deals with abandonment and neglect, so warning for those who don't want to read that.

story

comment enabled doc - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ByoUiQXTRdxzQt6vP7xMDAqQPFUJVrQ_AzNoDcbwDlA/edit?usp=sharing

read only doc - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c0yt327oKPkfPtolRaij6BSQTvuDzYYtvrxuxTzh6F0/edit?usp=sharing

critiques

[659] fragmented recursion intro

[603] Lunar's Doorstep

[600] wendy and greg

[2995] four halves make two pairs