[566] Untitled - Flash Fiction

Crit: [885] Left Alone (Working Title) - Short Story/Flash Fiction

Looking for feedback, general impression. Going for a dissociative/ritualistic kind of feeling. No idea about the title so "Untitled" for now.

Story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tz34xCWOhU5xsENnIszDmHcShVY2X5CpYfNSy3obq70/edit?tab=t.0