[2441] A Small Collection of Case Studies Regarding the Proper Feeding and Maintenance of Cats and Kittens: Case Study B

Hullo!

This is an excerpt from a short story I am writing which is a little collection of kind of farcical feline-adjacent vignettes.

They all completely stand on their own though.

Please let me know what you think! Thanks.

Link:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bvq4QvD8YbjTI66G0bN1RrSCVAxY8pIUQKbCOCXU5Vc/edit?usp=sharing

Critiques:

566 - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1nu928k/comment/nh01xp4/?context=3&utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

1356 - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1nswjt6/comment/nh8xwo0/?context=3&utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

1081 - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1nri1fr/comment/nh986y1/?context=3&utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

P.S. Mods pls lmk if this level/amount of critquery is sufficient. I am going to bed pretty soon but I can write another one in the morning if they are not!