[2859] My Enemies are the Magical Girls (Chapter 1)
Gearing up for NaNoWriMo. Got the first chapter of my story written, looking for advice on making it maximally catchy. I'm unapologetically writing it to market-- first for RoyalRoad, and then later for pitching to agents who ask for stuff that comps Dungeon Crawler Carl in their MSWL-- so it's a LitRPG even though it doesn't strictly have to be. I'm probably going to introduce livestreaming elements in the next few chapters... still thinking about how to do that, suggestions welcome.
Title: My Enemies are the Magical Girls
Hook: Sometimes you're the magical girl. Sometimes you're the monster of the week. Guess which one I am.
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Posted Oct 30, 2025, 8:01 AM UTC
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