[3060] Tomorrow

Hello everyone. Here's my story

I was going for a nihilistic, sarcastic character voice throughout the piece (besides the first part and maybe the last). Please let me know if the voice and tone fit the character and the setting.

Also, please read this after reading the piece, as it will affect your reading experience:>! The whole world-ending thing was meant to be fully ambiguous, and while the protagonist fully believes in it, I was expecting the reader to be suspicious about the reliability of the narrator. Please let me know whether you actually thought the narrator might be spiralling and was unreliable while reading the piece, or did you just accept the narrator's belief as fact?!<

Mods, please let me know if my crits aren't enough. I'll get more if that's the case.

Crit 1 (2 parts)

Crit 2 (2 parts)

Crit 3 (2 parts)