[1520] Inheritance

Hi! This is a short story I have been working on recently. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated!! Thank you in advance!

Short story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k8r9MzWmMslYymfS6ftBd1Xwu1f-ZMsWcaYVdph5Z9g/edit?tab=t.0

Critique: [1964]