[1728] Betrayal

Hello Everyone,

I would like to share the newest short story that I have written. I don't have anything specific that I am looking for in feedback. It is just nice to be able to hear different perspectives on my short stories. I always have a goal in mind for what I am trying to accomplish with a story and hearing how the reader is interpreting everything is interesting and helps me find different changes that may need to made.

I'm also always looking for ways to make the story better, so any suggestions for improvement are welcome.

Here is the link to my short story: Betrayal

Here is my critique: [1746] Uncle George