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The Point

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Sometimes, the world is so round
There's nothing to grab onto

Sometimes, it's all footholds
And I could climb forever

Sometimes, I could slip and fall
All the way down

Sometimes, I could catch myself
With just my thumb

Sometimes, my world changes
When nothing's changed

Sometimes,
I close one eye
Then the other

The mountain never moves
But it's never mine

Reviews:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1r86tn2/if_shakespeare_clogged_the_toilet/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1r85cft/what_must_be/

Posted Feb 18, 2026, 9:06 PM UTC

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