[1920] Blackjack & The Oracle

Hi guys! First post here, and I'd love some feedback on this story. I'm still in high school and don't have the opportunity for real academic writing critique, so this is the closest thing I can find. Please don't hesitate to tear this down. I'd genuinely appreciate it.

This story is about neo-noir future-telling, graph theory, blackjack and the desert:

My story

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Past critique: [2103] Skinner Box Blues