[2234]Pepperpops v3

Hello Destructive Readers, Thank you for all your crits on my first version of Pepperpops. Your feedback has been extremely valuable to me, giving me a chance to level up. I spare you my version 2, as it was only a minor improvement. Now, for clarity. This is in an opening for the second novel in a series. So it needs to onboard new readers while not boring returning audience to death. So, anyone who like to destruct my new version: welcome! Here it is [Pepperpops v3|https://docs.google.com/document/d/139TwYv7ful1wj6N_0aEj4ZvPDW64CPuHTur-kNS-s3c/edit?usp=sharing] I hope my own crits prove useful to you as well. Even if I'm not as seasoned yet as some of the senior members here around. My latest crit: [2240|https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1rz1lq2/comment/obq55l9/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button] Happy writing!