Two happy years

You could freeze the fire with a single word,
You could make me fly in the sky like a bird,
You could blow the clouds away and bring the sun,
I knew in my heart that you were the one.

I struggled to hold onto you with my hand,
I struggled to catch you running in the sand,
I struggled to make them understand our love,
But they chose to put the money above.

They raised you and gave you a beautiful life,
They raised you and denied you to choose your wife,
They raised you and didn't teach you about joy,
They didn't know they raised a restless boy.

Two happy years with you, and a beating heart,
Two happy years, before they pulled us apart,
Two happy years, before life hit me too hard,
Because of money lacking from my card.

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