[1939] The Precious Spacemen (Part 1)

My critiques: Marco (2940) https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1sinp1l/comment/ogcdxfx/?context=3

Mad as a Hatter (1676) https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1snhsur/comment/ogu76xs/?context=3

Magicae (1171) https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1sn63sa/comment/oguwr3o/?context=3

OK, here's the first part of a satirical sci-fi ish story that has been rejected by absolutely everyone (as all my stories have been)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gQ-doUYXlP8emCfhfBzxeOnde1HQIaIy6t03pEdmyX0/edit?usp=sharing

Be brutally honest. I need to know whether or not I am a complete talentless hack only good for writing technical manuals and marketing drivel. Don't spare my feelings, in fact please act like I don't have any. Don't you dare say it's good unless you actually like it; I've gotten too many bad critiques at this point and I am only going to reddit as a last resort.

If by some miracle people actually want to see more, I'll post the second part.

Thanks