[2940] Pleasantview, Marco ch. 3 (work title)

Primary tags: consciousness literature, humor

Minor tags: speculative

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I want to figure out a way to maintain my method but make it slightly more accessible.

I'd like to find out more about your personal way of reading, the process itself - how much time do you take, what do you focus on and why, where do you linger, what you return to? Your associations, immediate imagery, visualization, embodiment of other senses - how much do you feel them when reading? Do you speak to yourself while reading?

How does the story compare to your own experiences? What is your opinion on the prose, word choices, conveying of imagery, emotions and other senses?
Are there are moments you wish would have taken up more or less space in the text?

What is your opinion on the specific narrative voice?