[2234] The Crown, Chapter 1

First chapter of my book, looking for feedback, I'm not super touchy when it comes to writing feedback, so don't worry about that lol.

James Joe is 100% without a doubt completely a placeholder name, and it will change, (I'm looking for names right now, so if it's not in the document by the time you read it it means I found one.) but he's a tough one to name, so I'm struggling.

Best of luck, and I really hope you like it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gJNcjO_rt-T1yDn5QUiQYwGA0oYMseQUPMrNIOECEQk/edit?usp=sharing

(critiques: Gamma 27 [4782]) https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1u0tmyy/4782_gamma_27_a_man_falling_apart_in_a_cia/