A Softening Of The Tide

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I have wronged myself

I walked in fear over faith

The terror that has possessed me

The one i cannot face in the mirror

Its deadly charm has wooed my frail mind

I was exploited

A fallacy within myself

One that caused me to believe such things

One that caused me to recite to myself

"Attempt to rise no more"

"Your eyes speak in carnal tongues,"

"You see her only from outside her core,"

"How could a boy like you wish to become a man?"

But I realized the chains that bound me were unbroken by force

They were my own

My aches and doubts

The pain I carry every time I ask the moon

If I am the waves clashing beautifully against your shores

Shortly thereafter, i lost my grip on those questions

I could choose not to heed whether or not the moon would grow

Acceptance became bearable

If you had found an ocean that matched you, then so be it

I must simply lie and bide as the world revolves

Until you have already realized my place within yours

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Posted Jun 17, 2026, 2:39 PM UTC

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