antisimpsm

u/antisimpsm


r/LyricalWriting•

Verse 1

I see turtles, i see green

Had to pick 'em up, right 'cross the stream

Somethin special in these little things

Got their humpback shells! Their pondy smells!

Beautiful beautiful beautiful beautifully turtling

Verse 2

Had a wise one, he too was green

Taught me plenty things bout philosophy

Past old grass

Futures odd

Today is a memory to be fond

Verse 3

Gosh he was loyal, a loyal Bob

He was too good what could be done

Had to go so far away

To turtle heaven

Forever in a day

Prechorus

Bob, oh bob, oh bob

Why you had to leave me

I'll never know

Bob, oh bob, oh bob

I'll never let you go

Chorus

Prayer for the gone

Lament the young old turtle

Praise them with a s

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r/LyricalWriting•

Verse

Turn to the mirror

Part your hair, its so much clearer

When you show up and youre poised and all pristine

Lay it on a face

Strike up the band, drink some water

From the fountain or the glass of that burlesque queen

Prechorus

Your out there turning tables

Collecting love and pagers

Providing consolation

For the dejected and the bested

And the-

Your out there turning tables

Collecting love and pagers

Providing consolation

For the dejected and the bested

And the

Last of the one of a kind

Chorus

Put up a show, put up a show

Bet your hand, dont play it slow

Take control of the show

Empty bottles catch your voice, dilated, overdressed

Put up a show, put up a show

Be

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r/LyricalWriting•

Verse

Thin boys are awfully dim

And always out for pretty girls

If I should make myself a list

A million boys heads hung in it

The pretty ladies know the route

And kick on little guys

Picking off the lovely grins

Girls only dance with boys in tin

Chorus

And now shes starting to dance

Spots me out here scanning crowds

Less a tin man, more a tin can

Wearing boots i stole tonight

Verse

Thin boys are awfully dim

And always out for pretty girls

If i should ask a lady out

Then I'd be worth a thousand crowns

Chorus

And now shes starting to dance

Spots me out here scanning crowds

Less a tin man, more a tin can

Wearing boots i stole tonight

Bridge

Time for me to take a chance

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r/LyricalWriting•

Torture Town

Feedback Request

Intro

Take me out of torture town

Find a place where we'll be sound

If you can't shut that stony mouth

I'll pull the strings on stormy clouds

Verse

Will you wander me a trip

With fields for us to rest

Inside a bluesy meadowsweet

Somewhere west of the past

Prechorus

Well theres no way back to the Lily Hills

And riverbeds of cattails

No road back to love, love street

Chorus

For now

Im sitting in a cabbage

Eating onions, growing foul

Rotting

In this wagon

Right in torture town

Intro

Take me out of torture town

Find a place where we'll be sound

If you can't shut that stony mouth

I'll pull the strings on stormy clouds

Verse

Get me a flask, pour me a drink

Im eager

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r/LyricalWriting•

Rain Carried By The Wind

Feedback Request

Verse

Tonight i say my farewells to you

And though it seems like the weathers buzzing

With only harsh traces of the road

It's heavier outside

For i can see the windpipes are humming

Like the row was always calling

To you

Chorus

Although what could i say

To stop the wind of rain

To stop the storm-fed veins from freezing you

But i couldn't bear to win

And watch the rain carried by wind

Knowing you'll flood back onto me

Most when i need you near

Verse

Yesterday i gave my wishes to you

We've met both ends of this old street

With no place left to go

I'd better tell a lie

Cause i hear the meter, it's frying

I'd rather keep you smiling

For you

Chorus

Although what could i

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r/dlsu•

BSCS or BSIT?

General Question

Im worried that i wont be able to handle the workload, subjects, and the logical reasoning with bscs. Problem is, i have to move to New Zealand a year after graduating my course and idk if BSIT is enough for me to get anywhere near the BSCS ceiling there.

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Beans and bones will sprout from my mouth

Long before i lay aside our keys

If i send your skin off to the stream

Will my river still run within

Will my sailboat glide on slowly

Until I'm vapor among the clouds

Will i gather dust beneath your soles

While the bell calls for you aloud 

A gathering has come to witness me

Upon a public stage I stand to learn

Whether I am bound for glory

Or the misery-laden rope of the gallows

Has the course been fouled beyond repair

For I was the shoe fitted to this jest

The iron that forged it at its finest

What wrong have I done

To be made to stand on nothing

The earth withdrew beneath my feet

An affable sight for those below

This beautiful c

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r/justpoetry•

Beans and bones will sprout from my mouth

Long before i lay aside our keys

If i send your skin off to the stream

Will my river still run within

Will my sailboat glide on slowly

Until I'm vapor among the clouds

Will i gather dust beneath your soles

While the bell calls for you aloud

A gathering has come to witness me

Upon a public stage, I stand to learn

Whether I am bound for glory

Or the misery-laden rope of the gallows

Has the course been fouled beyond repair

For I was the shoe fitted to this jest

The iron that forged it at its finest

What wrong have I done

To be made to stand on nothing

The earth withdrew beneath my feet

An affable sight for those below

This beautiful

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r/LyricalWriting•

Verse

I've never been

On a road oh- in this town

The prettiest place, all my life

I've never seen such a humble disguise

Hiding a smile no tongue I've ever learned

Could ever describe

But it's mine

But she's mine

Yea, she's mine

Oh!

Verse

I'd love to mail you

A wondrous coat to seal your gown

You're one who could bloom without a crowd

Dont swallow my pride, my fist stays closed tonight

I'll build you a scarecrow to ward the birds away

From whats mine

Cause you're mine

Chorus

Come strip my skin, enclose me in yours

I wanna nail all open doors

Im hunting birds to feed you a song

I dont want them singing anymore

Bridge

Your petals are falling

Your skin is wearing thin

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r/LyricalWriting•

Verse

Lend me the flower or I'll decay

I need to cobble up what to say

To save my garden while it's been cold

I've been calling for the marigold

Prechorus

It sold me ribbons for my eyes

The marigold was dressed in white

Chorus

The magnolia, she keeps the attic full of birds

And raises nests out ticking

The magnolia, she turns the thunder into words

With all these stories about a girl

She makes the moonlight start to twirl

Verde

The postman grew a second head

And learned to whistle through his teeth

He left a package on the porch

Addressed to "anybodys spring"

Prechorus verse

Im hunchbacked and forgetful now

Forgive me, i was out of line

Thought you were playing by my

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r/OCPoetry•

“I am nothing,”

“I shall die if your absence is the last kind of presence you leave in my life”

Such potent expressions coming from such miniscule spirits

Phrases of fools blind to their own errors

Fools who do not care for death

If their hearts are bound by restraint, what exactly builds these feeble minds

What kind of allure gives rise to their will to speak words beyond their reality

What sort of gruesome form casts their dread

The embodiment of these fools was once a naive and languid past of myself

From whomever that boy prayed for love and paid in naivety

His soul had no escape

Not even the slightest plan

He was stuck—content, prepared to die by testimonies he had spoken w

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