THE ESCAPE

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She was just waiting for the day to come

when she'll spread her wings and run faraway from

all her burdens all her grief

Saying,"Its getting way too tough for me"

too many people saying too many words

too many friends with no returns

too many stares too many glares

too many thoughts which she can't share.

So shes just waiting for the day to come

she'll catch a flight and runaway for

the escape she needs for herself

away from the suffocation the lies and the tears.

The thoughts have started getting worse

now shes started her plans she knows where she'll go

She'll go to a place which no one knows.

She'll dry her tears and start once more.

She needs no help she'll be fine alone 

because she needs an escape 

one where she'll belong

Poet's corner:Hi everyone!!!Thank you all so much for reading my poem .Do let me know your thoughts about it and whether i can make any changes to improve my poetry.

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Posted Jun 27, 2026, 10:32 AM UTC

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