In the In-between

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I fell in love with you in the in-between,
In the silence, the moments that went unseen.
The walks from home to work where you occupied my mind,
The blank stare afternoons where all i would find
In my head was you, the way you had looked that morning,
When we had been two, the day ahead just dawning.

Between the first time I called your name and when you last called mine,
All that time taken searching for the perfect words to rhyme,
Each beat, each second, a chance for love to grow,
To meet your eyes and to be certain, to know,
For all that had passed for us as we move to pastures green,
I fell in love with you in the in-between.

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Posted Jun 30, 2026, 12:23 AM UTC

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