[2336] The disappearance of Lady Suzanne (the Voidslinger Saga) - Sci-Fi/Fantasy Epic - Adult

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oxrc65OYA6oU9ON-zzZPIRl33sz7wiyGUTaMueAlNI0/edit?usp=sharing

Hello everyone. I would like to share with you the prologue chapter for my space fantasy novel that I'm working on.

This first chapter is meant to evoke the sense of mystery, raise a lot of questions and talk about the themes of my book (death, entropy, forgetting, religion, faith, importance.) But most of all I wanted to portray the power strungles that the book will show.

This is very dialogue centered, but this is also important because communication is also a major theme of my book and also the roots of my magic system (at least for humans). I wanted feedback mostly on the dialogue, and if possible I want some prose feedback aswell. I'm not really a prose guy hahaha, I prefer dialogue much more but I know both are important.

The book will follow a Dunkirk style narrative, following four storylines in different time frames all converging in the red hour. (24 hours before the red hour, 24 day, 24 weeks and 24 months, with a few stand alone chapters that take place in different time frames. This 24 minutes storyline will continue by the end of the book).

Not all questions will be answered in this chapter, but it you could, please answer this question:

AFTER READING THIS CHAPTER, WOULD YOU CONTINUE TO READ AFTER?

Please be honest. Thank you so much!

Previous review [2689]:
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