[3147] Tyrantland - Chapter 2 (Colonial Fantasy)

Critiques:

[3170] Chapter One, The Beautiful Vile

[843] The Knight Marches On

Hi all,

I know I'm back relatively quickly, but I believe I've redrafted chapter 2 for the better (if context is needed, chapter one can be found here ). Just looking for any comments once more, but I am eager to hear about the revisions to the card game, and how they now affect the flow of the reading.

Just as a note, one particular feedback suggested (from the first post of this chapter, found here ) that I perhaps shift some of chapter 3's content over to chapter 2. I've done that here, just to see how it works, but I wanted feedback on whether it is effective, or if chapter 2 can effectively end just before the #2.

Thank you for any feedback that is given, no matter how harsh!

TYRANTLAND - CHAPTER 2

(Note to mods: I got a note saying there has to be 48 hrs between posts, but my last post was 3 days ago, so this doesn't break the rules.)