madformattsmith•

i like the 'exposing' content in your blog, however, i felt like i needed a proper introduction as to what the whole scenario is about to fully understand the context. now i understand what i've just read, the posts make me feel that the blog had a satirical element to the situation of what you are blogging about. what i mean is that i get the feeling of 'seriously, can i believe this is actually happening right now!?' and after clicking on the external links, i can't believe what other people are posting on the net. (idk it's just personal thoughts, sorry!). i would suggest maybe having a "contact me" page if people are interested. other than the above points, it has a nice, clean design, and ties in well with the 'bleach' theme.

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0rganicSgt•

Not bad. Your theme works well.

I'd suggest adding a 'contact us' page. Your 'about' page is good and to the point.

However, as a person knowing absolutely nothing about this atrocity, I'd suggest having some introductory info on the topic in a place easy to see and access. I felt quite lost browsing over your posts. It took some time to actually realize the whole thing.

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0rganicSgt•

I've read more of your posts and I must say that this stuff is serious. You write well too. If I may suggest starting up a FB page and a Twitter account. I feel that your community will grow rapidly.

Furthermore, after reading your posts I'm filled with a"what now?" feeling. There lacks a general plan of action in your blog. Yes, your content is good and exposing the evils of these practices are of paramount importance, however, giving me a link to a petition to sign, or maybe a banner I could add onto my own blog etc., will all be very effective.

Just some personal thoughts. Idk.

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-Judge-Mental-OP•

That's a great idea! Thank you for the input.

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0rganicSgt2•
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