Another long distance love song

To taste and kiss your dainty lips
That I already
Have seemed to miss
Daydreaming these grey beams of bliss
As I see red coals asmoulder
A passing thought of when i'm old
Just me looking at the same thing,
But with you laid on my shoulder.

And to dance upon your smitten hips
With glowing sighs
With flowing thighs
With softly mumbled
Moaning cries
In a softly flowing, glowing rise
I can't stop picturing these whittled highs.

To play hit or miss
With fingertips
While I look into your eyes

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