[Review Video]How does my voice over sound in this MMO review? :O

Video- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-YWpbVXRw7o

I've been making videos for a few months now, have gone fully scripted because I'm just simply horrible at arranging my thoughts in unscripted voiceovers lol. I get a lot of compliments on my voice but I still feel like I could be doing so much better, but not really sure how.

Self review- I get kind of nervous sometimes in front of my mic, and I'm afraid you can hear it in my voice. I've been told I'm robotic and lack personality, though that was a few months ago, I've maybe improved since then, but I'm wondering what you all think :D

Written reviews of other videos- https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/3kl1zh/review_video_how_can_i_improve/ https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/3k55mo/review_video_is_my_voice_boring_or_interesting/