[Review Video] My first video!

So I just uploaded my first video today. I'm trying to have a youtube channel centered around books. Give me some feedback! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M3uzlWKhVkg

self review: I like the editing I did in the video. Although, sometimes I feel like it can be rather iffy. I deffinetly need to upgrade to a better camera/mic in the future, but for just getting started I'm alright with the quality of the footage. Also, maybe I could be a bit more enthusiastic/funny? Overall, I'm somewhat pleased with my first venture into this channel, and hopefully I will get better with time

previous reviews https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/3koy56/review_video_background_music_question/ https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/3kp2gy/review_video_gameplay_compiled_video_how_can_i/