[Review Video] Cornwall Holiday Vlog (Part 1)

Reviews: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/3kr0um/review_video_trying_a_new_sort_of_content_in_my/ https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/3kndrn/review_video_starting_a_channel_and_podcast/

Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AWpsW3A9K0Q

I would like some constructive criticism on this video (The positives, the negatives, the lot). I would really appreciate it.

Self-Review: This video is not great quality. It has some ups and downs but overall its a nice relaxing video in my opinion.