[Review Video] Trying a new sort of content in my videos.

Been trying to make weekly videos. Although its a lot of work, I fairly enjoy it and I'm gonna try to make it a goal to keep this up for at least a year. This is not my first rodeo and I am always trying to improve my videos. So I tried to do a different type of video. The video is more of a factual video with some info you may or may not know. This is actually my first attempt in trying to make content that tries to keep the audience interested instead of just me speaking my mind. So, what do you think? Other sort of feedback is appreciated as well.

Self Review: I feel like the pacing of the video was rushed in the end and I think the video should be a bit longer for the audience to understand the points I'm trying to make or the jokes I'm trying to make.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3lssjetLVM

My 2 reviews:

https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/3kmpoa/review_videohow_does_my_voice_over_sound_in_this/

https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/3kp2gy/review_video_gameplay_compiled_video_how_can_i/