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LeesSteez

Drunk Poem.

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I meant what I said,
but won’t admit that now.
“Babe I was wasted.
My spirits were down.”

"Your spirits were down?”
“You drank spirits all night."
“You can’t use that excuse
after all of our fights.”

“Would you rather I said
I drink booze to see clearly?”
or
"I didn’t mean it babe
I love you dearly.”

“I just wish you’d speak the
words on your mind!”
“Trust me I would,
but we`d fight every time.”

“So thats it then,
what youre really thinking?
It comes out in the open
whenever you`re drinking?”

Fuck it. “That`s right.
I'm goddamn clairvoyant.
I drink to put up with you,
you fucking annoyance.”

“Im leaving.” “Wait Im drunk.”
“Well isn’t that a shocker!”
“Jack can do your dishes
and you can fuck Johnnie walker.”

“Babe please just ignore
those things that I said.”
“If you weren’t around,
I`d rather be dead.”

“I can’t anymore."
"I`m getting my things.”
"Good luck with life Lee,
and all that it brings."

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3q7nl4/a_cigarette/cwe9znv

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3q81cn/consummate/cwea3mn

Posted Oct 27, 2015, 4:50 AM UTC · edited

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