Blue Star

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Space Station

Blue star floating
in low earth orbit
like a water bug in the lakes below.
Unable to conquer
the midnight moonlight,
zipping by
five miles per second

In a geocentric orbit,
in a continuous angular free-fall,
in a void,
close to home,
Mortal men watch
out of crystalline chilled windows
towards turquoise eyes.

EDIT: Poem revised and title changed. Subject to more revision.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/41hw9s/my_sun/cz2uphb

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/41fg52/another_ocean_on_the_planet/cz2v4lx

Posted Jan 18, 2016, 5:16 PM UTC · edited

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