This Tall to Ride

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We’re on a
Cliff-hanging roller coaster;
Theater-goers, thrust into
The film of apocalyptic doom-
We all will one day
Perish.

The lies, the cries,
Our smiles, and shortcomings-
All summed up,
By a tiny dash,
Etched into
Stone.

And even that
Is not enough for us
To love each other.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/420dkb/ice/ https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/421zks/hes_pleased/

Posted Jan 22, 2016, 1:26 AM UTC · edited

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