Moonlight Sea Sonata

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In that lipid pool of blue
An ocean before my eyes
A gateway of the moons reflection
I am absolutely mesmerized
An aura or warm feeling
The sand beneath my toes
These beaches are the place to stay
The only place I want to go
The simmering melody
Played across your ocean deep
On the shores of your warming coast
Is where I wish to sleep
Moonlight is dawning now
What reflections appear bright
Stuck in your hypnotic gaze
On this star filled night
As long as you serenade
And entrance me with your melody
Here on this beach in your sonata
Is the only place I want to be

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Posted Jan 31, 2016, 7:35 AM UTC · edited

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