A Cheeky Poem for a Girl Named Breakfast

Feedback Received!
I thought I saw you in a dusty book

Stalking inky blots like Nick Carraway

But wasn't it all just a clever hook

With your chocolates and cabernet?


You never were that fancy

But I tell you awfully politely 

Please, I love you anyway


I thought I saw you in the sandy dunes

Burning in the ultraviolet

Your 4x4 left tracks in the afternoon

And vanished with the climate


The heat has turned me ruby

Or am I blushing much too fiercely?

See, you have me in a daze


I thought I saw you in a rocket ship

Forming branches of the universe

You kissed the stars with your rosy lips

And I stood to gain that curse


Your black hole eyes have got me

I can't escape your gravity

Look, you've caught me all the way

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/44a55x/edit/czoqp3z https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/448tct/mortality/czoqls3

Posted Feb 5, 2016, 12:41 PM UTC · edited

912
Loading comments…