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Something that may or may not resemble a thought

Feedback Received!

The dragon is a dangerous beast

Beware of her talons

Spikes as large as forearms

Sheer power

Over no less than mere flesh

She preys

Almost waits, It seems

Fuck.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/44pzs5/love_sex_drugs_nsfw/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/43o2pe/the_underlake/

Edit: changed line seven to "Almost waits, It seems" and removed line eight. Change based on feedback from @layman https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/44qjor/something_that_may_or_may_not_resemble_a_thought/cztvrml

Posted Feb 8, 2016, 11:36 AM UTC · edited

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