The Heaviness of Loss

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My vision is a kaleidoscope

of your image.

 

I’m tinged with heartache

and memories of you.

 

Your touch is faint

whispers on my skin;

a soft and elegant caress.

 

I call out,

reaching for you;

you're gone.

 

My chest weighed down

with the massiveness of your absence.

 

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Edit: u/actualnameislana took the above and turned it into something I like much more. Here it is.

 

My vision kaleidoscopes

With images of you;

 

Tinged with heartache

and memories.

 

Your faint touch

whispers on my skin;

a soft and elegant caress.

 

I call out,

reach for you;

you're gone.

Posted Feb 16, 2016, 3:47 PM UTC · edited

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