[Review Video] (Swearing), (Graphic Violence) My Gaming Channel

Hello My name is Thomas i've been doing gaming commentary for a little while now, and was hoping to gets some critique about my videos.

This one is my newest https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nTeHmubjRXc

Self review: I know my commentary isn't the best (but i'm trying to make it better) i focus alot on quality but things still end up falling through the cracks(audio and video corrupts or distortions). i recently got new thumbnails (from my sister). i shouldn't have started such long series in my developing stages it makes them very weird if you watch them all. i've been messing around with my mic so some episodes are loud or quiet.

Review 1: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/46o3z2/channel_critique_i_would_honestly_like_some_feed/ Review 2: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/46f5mw/review_video_graphic_violence_finally_took_the/