I wasn't sure if you could put a comma into a haiku, though I appreciate the kind words :) thank you!

 This is very intriguing and i love how short and to the point it is. It may look better with a comma after the word shade. I love how the title ties in to the poem itself without sharing any words either. Its a great poem :)

Well that wasn't my intention, I just think that bryophytes are beautiful in how simple they are, yet how important they are to the environment. I wouldn't say its an exotic word nor would I say my ending is deep. I'm just juxtaposing the small appearance with a large role in ecology.

I like the format, but the use of a single exotic word, and a "deep" ending. 

I think you should play around with the words, but let the format stay. 

Found in the cool shade 

A simple bryophyte is

Tiny but so grand

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