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dirtyLizard

Blue sky meltdown

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The sky is falling
but not like you'd think it would.

Massive blue then purple then orange and red globs fall and disappear over the horizon like raindrops on a window
trailing iridescent oil
into an out of sight blaze
that must be huge because I can see it glow from here.

As I watch warm translucent syrup air drip from space
in delicious flammable jelly drops
stars appear on the higher end of the bowl I must be looking down on
being tilted
emptying my gasoline ice cream napalm sundae sky
into the sunset fire.


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The Siphon

Rapid Eye Movements


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Posted Mar 17, 2016, 6:04 AM UTC

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