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Strangers

Feedback Received!

He committed strange-murder

Said ‘write me a love poem’

(In anything but words)

Then we were not

strangers anymore

Which was strange because

all we’d shared was words

He committed a strange murder -

but it was odd because

When he did it,

(abrupt and clean)

My own scream

was what I heard

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4asg56/feedback_request_untitled/d13fonq

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4ajx1s/rapid_eye_movements/d13ftuc

Posted Mar 17, 2016, 5:04 PM UTC · edited

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