Strangers
He committed strange-murder
Said ‘write me a love poem’
(In anything but words)
Then we were not
strangers anymore
Which was strange because
all we’d shared was words
He committed a strange murder -
but it was odd because
When he did it,
(abrupt and clean)
My own scream
was what I heard
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