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Estyll

Where Did The Butterflies Go

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Where did the butterflies go,

The ones that we did watch grow

As they flew across the waters top,

Playing

gently Falling

slowly Drop

One caught the other as it fell,

But now that playful flying does not dwell.

That missing feeling,

that empty air

Where they played without much care.

I found them,

injured, on the shore.

I nurtured it to try and soar

Like it did days ago,

When never feeling loveless smother

Never one,

Without the other

The butterfly fights to find its mate

Cause as one, an awful lonely weight.

He hears her wings of distant shutter

his heart

it bounces

it yearns

it beats with flutter.

Once Again they are together,

their flight,

once alone now always tether

where did the butterflies go

out beyond the waters edge

Now watch them dance with a distant glow

Just a quick one i wrote whilst in the mood. Nothing special Critique 1 Critique 2

Posted Apr 4, 2016, 12:24 PM UTC

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