A rework of an old homebrew attempt for all your monster slaying/becoming needs. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g7CuToTz7RDS8eQzyWhYFcphKpSv2na3iFUu320TMNs/edit?usp=sharing
Please critique.
Posted Apr 11, 2016, 2:35 AM UTC · edited
the proficiency bonus is all wonky. Why do you skip 4, and end at 7?
An oversight I hadn't noticed. Thanks for letting me know.
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The proficiency bonuses are wrong, all classes have the same progression no matter what. I'd go back and make sure to bring this in line with the other classes, comparing abilities etc to make it more balanced overall.
An oversight. Thank you for telling me.
I believe that killing blow is a bit too strong. It would make more sense that killing blow also works against your chosen quarries. Secondly, it doesn't make sense that a 7th level blood reaver gets an ability that affects a feature they don't have until level 11. Lastly, how many manifestation points need to be spent to cast each manifestation? is it 1 point of manifestation per spell level? can they be cast at higher levels for more manifestation points?
It was 1 point of manifestation, but then I realised that eight incendiary clouds in one sitting is a little crazy. Anyways, made some edits. Thanks for your input.
I like the clarification on the hell bringer manifestation feature. some more comments. For what doesn't kill you, do you mean constitution checks or saves? saves are more common for resisting effects. Also, on Infernal Vengeance, in fifth edition, it's considered a dexterity save instead of reflex, 3.5 is reflex.
Thank you. I still have a bad habit of thinking of everything in 3.5 terms.
not a problem. even Matt Mercer on critical role still slips in a reflex or will save from time to time.
Under the class feature The Beast Without you state that the claws are treated as versatile weapons, while a weapon being versatile means that is a one-handed weapon that you may also use as a two-handed weapon.
Did you intend it to mean the claws could be used with either Strength or Dexterity?
That's the one, yes. I forgot the name, I'll go back and edit it. Thanks!