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Does she have a soul that flows?

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Look what English helped me to make:


Does she have a soul that flows?

Does she have a soul that grows?

...

Yes, I have a soul that flows.

Yes, I have a soul that grows,

and knows.

a soul that,

as it mows,

sows, and stowes,

the growths, and knowths, of tomorrow.

...

written the day after I read the Tao Teh Ching


https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4f93b6/why_would_i_want_to_go_out/d277qm9

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4f8wu6/where_did_you_go/d2783ls

X-posted from r/Tulpas,

and also with r/conlangs

Posted Apr 18, 2016, 5:51 AM UTC · edited

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