Ophelia (An experiment in more traditional haiku)

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Playing around with traditional haiku rules, though I know I am missing a lot of them as it's difficult to follow them in English. But here it is:

 

Snow dusts on dead leaves-

Hush, be still as warm fingers

Dance on brand new skin

 

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Posted Apr 19, 2016, 1:06 AM UTC

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