I, Hatred & Depression

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I’m in an ocean of emotion

The waves are thrashing with comotion

I’m drowning with eternal devotion

In that I hope there’s no demotion

So much change, so much motion…

Locomotion like a train

Thoughts chugging through my brain

I’m deranged, inhumane because of

Too much mental strain

I begin to question if i’m sane

I try to abstain, constrain, contain

Lock it up with a ball and chain

The pain and disdain

But it’s impossible to sustain

My attempts are in vain to stop the rain...

Here comes the hurricane...

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4fnwql/the_envoy_of_mr_vanitas/d2b4vhp

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4fq4z3/existential_night/d2b4s8s

Posted Apr 21, 2016, 1:15 AM UTC

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